Academic Wiring: Punctiation

Comma That cannot be used with comma
If it look paralel but the subjet is there, put comma before and.

Practice 1 (comma) 2. A company that wants to be successful must spend a great deal of money to advertise its products.
3. Advertising is essential to the free enterprise system, yet it can sometimes be very annoying.
4. Every minute of the day and night, people are exposed to ads on television, on billboards, in the newspapers, and in the magazines.
5. Yo cannot even avoid advertising in the privacy of your own car or your own home, for advertisers have begun selling their products in those places, too.
6. In the last few years, advertising agencies have started to hire young people to hand out circulars on street corners and in parking lots.
7. You can often find these circulars stuck on your windshield thrust, through the open windows of your car, stuffed in your mailbox, or simply scattered on your front doorstep.
8. Because Americans are exposed to so much advertising, they hav…

Academic writing

Master degree is about reading, writing, and reporting. Discussion in between.

It's got to be objective. Find sources.

Primary sources
Secondary sources, compile of primary sources
Tertiary sources, compile of secondary sources

The professor know all book, no plagiarism, don't copy paste, they know, even I know.

University have many libraries
And you will have access to previous thesis

Carry notes everywhere
Dont procrastinate
Read critically

Do not underestimate

Ms: married woman who do not use husband name


Parantheses = Brackets

Do not translate address

1990s (nineteen ninetees)
1990 (nineteen ninety)

there is no aphrostope 1990's <--- wrong

was and were will always written in full.

Drafting, editing and proof reading
thats why dont procrastinate
Summarise the data


Example of direct quotations Dr Yixuan Ma, a well-known  astrophysicist who has been studying black holes, said, "They are the most interesting phenome…

Theory, Literature review, and Hypothesis Formulation

Theory Framework based on facts
Descripting theory Following rational logical thinking
Criterias of good theories
Can explain phenomenonClear and conciseLogical and fit with the facts or general beliefCan predict possiblities of phenomenonRecent
Reliable theory Its validity can be proven with new or more comprehensive data.
Thinking framework A diagram that outline the flow of logic of a study.

Theoretical framework
can be proposed on:Available theoriesNew theories, or modification of available theories
Literature review Should show all relevant documents, both published and unpublished.

Information required
Subject specificResearch method
Steps required
Identify and access published and unpublished materials on the topic of interersetExtract systematically the relevant informationWrite up the literature review
Introducing subject behavior that take risks and company performanceWhy it is important to studyIdentifying problems to study
Hypotheses assumption, idea or belief about a …

Introduction, Problems, and Variables

Introduction Provides readers with the background information for the research reported in the paper. What is the main reason that we study the object.
Based on
Available StatisticsObservationLiterature review
Inspiration for problems
Deduction from theoriesInterdisciplinary perspectiveDiscussion with practitionerPersonal experience by visual observationsRelevant literature
Good research problems
Useful for general publicSupporting various perspectiveRealistic, possible to study (feasible and researchable)Problems must be suitable with researchers qualifications.  Types of variables Causal relationshipindependentdependentmoderatingintervening/mediating
Kualitas pelayanan (I) ---> Kepuasan pelanggan (D)
Kualitas pelayanan (I)---> Kepuasan pelanggan (D)                                      ^                    Faktor demografi (M)
Kualitas pelayanan (I) ---> Kepuasan pelanggan (in) ------> loyalitas pelanggan (D)
                                      ^                    Faktor…

Research Method

Research GoalProblem SolvingTheory makingAnswering questionsResearch type
Pure research (theory making)Applied research (problem solving)Descriptive research (description of a phenomenon)Correlation research (to find correlation between variables)Explanatory research (explaining my something happened)Exploratory research (go deep into phenomenon to find factors)Quantitative research (quantifying phenomenon)Qualitative research Research Objectives

Proofing available theories, deductive (Bachelor Degree)Developing available theories, deductive (Master Degree)Finding new theories (Doctoral Degree)

Research elements
Problem(s)Theoretical Framework (literature study)Concept definitionDimensions and Variables/IndicatorHypothesis
Steps Concept ---> Dimension -- > variable --> indicator

Concept example
Dimension examples
environmenthealth facilitycostsinflation
Variable examples
parents education
Finished educationHealth facility to population ratio
Example Democracy --> Civi…

Archimate 3.0

By Lyndon D'Oliveiro

Archimate 3.0 Notation
Passive Structure= Object, tidak ada behavior (bisa melakukan sesuatu, cuma bisa diperlakukan)
Active Structure= Subject, yang melakukan
Behavioral = Predikat, kegiatan

Archimate membuat business menjadi lebih agile karena membuat jadi blok blok

UML=lebih spesifik software arsitektur
Archimate=more big picture, UML tidak sesuai untuk big picture.

Layer Layer
-Implementation & Migration

BAT = Core Language


Panah = Serving
Panah Putus Putus, segitiga gede = Realisasi

Serving (panah tidak putus putus)

Service = External element, duduknya di luar, dilihat customer
Proses = Internal element, duduknya di dalam

Realise = yang menghasilkan yang dominan, he is in control. dia yang control. ga bisa kalo ga ada dia
Serving = yang menerima yang dominan (biasanya dari service)

Access (panah putus putus)
Panah masuk ke dalam data, data menerima sesuatu dari sistem
kalau berbaik =…

TOGAF v9.1

by Lyndon D'Oliviero

Architecture Development Method (metode pengembangan arsitektur)

Business goal:
1 Meningkatkan kepuasan pelanggan

Business Strategy:
1.1 Mengurangi biaya operasi
1.2 Menambah lokasi/channel
1.3 Meningkatkan service

Technology Strategy:
1.1.1 otomasi
1.2.1 quality control
1.3.1 integrated platform

Pelayanan Lelang

Business goal:
1. Lelang lebih dikenal oleh masyarakat luas sebagai alternatif jual beli

Business Strategy:
1.1 Meningkatkan kemudahan dalam pelaksanaan lelang
1.2 Meningkatkan publikasi

Technology Strategy:
1.1.1 Aplikasi e-auction
1.2.1 Publikasi melalui media sosial

Tujuan masuk di fasa A (architecture vision)

Fase B, Business architecture
B: Proses dan peran
Identify the change: apakah yang perlu diubah
Define the change: apakah building block yang perlu diperbaiki
Business: people & process

Fase C: Information System Architecture (Data & Aplikasi)
di helpdesk butuh aplikasi, aplikasi perlu ada…